- Commended for scale and ambition of project and well done for pulling together the first terms work
- As a general comment, very beautifully presented work and thorough project documentation
- Good set of plans. Sections could interrogate the Architecture more, they risk being diagrammatic
- The clarity of the Architectural proposition is sometimes clouded by slick visuals
- Some lovely atmospheric moments and imagined light/ material scenarios within the building
- Need to look at some good sectional drawings and practice drawing in section at a scale of 1:50 upwards.
Final Mark: 68 (1st class grade boundary)
Feedback given by Melissa Appleton and Nicola Read
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